i really can’t say

the sky is blue today;
more of a mottled, coddled gray.

i really don’t think
i like my kids today
this teenaged tyrant way,
this humming hormoned storm.

i really don’t know
if today the words
will flow. perhaps today’s
the day they finally just





Day 9 for NaPoWriMo. 






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5 Responses to i really can’t say

  1. Mama Zen says:

    I’m right there with you.

  2. timkeen40 says:

    Looks like they flow pretty well to me.


  3. Kir Piccini says:

    Lets hope tomorrow is much better.

  4. nmykel says:

    motled, coddled gray says it all. You’re a powerhouse of poetry!

  5. Pingback: NaPoWriMo – Day 9 – “Every Dawn You’re Surprising” by David Ellis | toofulltowrite (I've started so I'll finish)

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