Kireji

{cutting words}

 

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Haiku me
a hum, Love. A song
of morning. A sun.
A slice of sea.

Haiku me
true. Love the way it
slants and drums, thrums
hearts against the sky.

Haiku me
blue. Love, we’ve come
too far. Stars dimmed;
the kigo is unclear.

 

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2 Responses to Kireji

  1. mtw says:

    oh, this is exquisite! the way you capture the general feeling of a haiku in that same compaction of words. it holds so much in so little. beautiful.

  2. She says:

    a hum-love … Massive heart “attacks” for this adorableness. Also “haiku me true love.” You are just the most precious poet EVER! I won’t point out every nuance, but you know I see (and adore) it all.

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