Living Suddenly Without Thinking


Did we dance? I only remember the lull of that bone
bubble moon, the grin-glimmer of her melting into

shimmer sea. Did we twist the truth? There’s no
proof to the contrary on God’s green earth, just

the skip-staccato of one last
…………b     r     e     e     z     e.


A second offering for today’s Quadrille over at dVerse. Come play! 



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11 Responses to Living Suddenly Without Thinking

  1. Grace says:

    love that b r e e z e and all the words dancing h e r e 🙂

  2. hayesspencer says:

    I too love that b r e e z e….

  3. thotpurge says:

    Every word so beautifully crafted into its place!

  4. WeLL.. as Shakira
    says.. hiPs and eYes
    do not liE..
    and after 5444
    miles in 33 full
    months of dance..
    i repreSent umm.. aLL
    heR reMArk withouT
    one word.. noW iN
    thaT heART liFe..;)

  5. Oh every single word included. For you it’s still a b r e e z e

  6. lillian says:

    oh — dancing on the breeze, with the breeze. Your words always dance on the page! 🙂 Smiling I am.

  7. Mish says:

    Oh you fit them ALL in so well with a breezy finale. Cool!

  8. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Which is surely enough. 🙂

  9. Bryan Ens says:

    bone bubble moon. Just when I think I’ve heard every possible beautiful way of describing the moon, you give me another one! 🙂

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