Play magnetic poetry here.
I love this. 🙂
“o crap” had me laughing, but the broken self-secret could be heavy and sorrowful … also, I like how you placed “listen” right under “self-secret”
also, “listen” is slightly to the left, so it also says “listen, self …” like the speaker is talking to herself
I also see: “self-secret broken … no poetry today” … Like you can’t write because you’re hurting, or like you feel betrayed. Maybe someone read your diary. 😛 Or your best friend or sister exposed your secrets. (My daughters do that daily. I can’t get them to understand how valuable they could be to each other.)
There’s also “no blue poetry today” and ” no poetry sky today” … that’s the best thing about the magnets. You can hide secrets there by stacking certain words.
Like, I also see “today, crap-laugh.” 🙂 That’s when you’re laughing while you’re on the potty.
You’re welcome. 😉
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