it also rises

..
i am a monument of broken.

spill of sea
salt, smudge of ink,
pink eraser dust
apricot sky. i lie
in soft tones
of intricate eggshell
blue. i

mourn no thing;
these cracks are where
the last long
golden strands of sun
spill through.

 

..
Another Q44 spilled for the prompt today over at dVerse. Come play! 

 

 

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21 Responses to it also rises

  1. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    VER GOOD ONE—WITH HOOPE!

  2. Charley says:

    “i am a monument of broken.” Shades of cummings! A wonderfully understated poem that packs a punch of reflection, rereading, and ruminating.

  3. This is so very beautiful. I love reading and writing “I am” poetry–this stands out. Applause!

  4. Grace says:

    Opening line is superb De ~ And line breaks too specially i lie ~

  5. kanzensakura says:

    This is incredible. the first line simply stuns one. Bravo on this one.

  6. Candy says:

    we are each beautifully broken – love the sun shining in

  7. ghostmmnc says:

    Sounds like a beautiful painting…a painting of a life lived well, yet imperfect, as we all are.

  8. Patti says:

    Beautiful. I love the hopefulness of the sun shining in through the cracks.

  9. lifelessons says:

    I always savor the originality of your images.

  10. I love the blue. i

    So much that just ties it together in that.

  11. maria says:

    I love the touch of hope in the end. ❤

  12. kim881 says:

    That pink eraser got in again! 😉

  13. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Absolute beauty of expression, in the context of what seems to me a terrible resignation.

  14. NJ says:

    This painted such a wonderful picture. Like a painting with the sunlight breaking through it. Loved it 🙂

  15. Oils, pastels, acrylics and watercolors could not paint what you’ve expressed so DE-lightfully. You remain my idol!

  16. always. the sun is my favorite spilt thing

  17. lillian says:

    As others have said…..first line is so very powerful. The title — brings hope for hopeless situations. Life moves on — even in turmoil – even in broken-ness.

  18. Oh, I like this, very moving, very beautiful. I like it all.

  19. ihatepoetry says:

    Woo – super cool.

  20. There is so much mystery to this piece. I love the beautiful descriptions. And the last three lines? Very nice!

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