things you cannot keep in jars



:
the dance of trees
the moon’s lull
the bubblegrin sun as it
melt-shimmers over blue

a light twist-skipping
green into the seaquake

the breeze that spills your
soul to stars

the rose;
the risen thorns

the way a journey
jars
you loose,
alive,
awake.
..
Another Q44 for Bjorn’s dVerse prompt today. Bar opens at noon, PST. Come play! 

 

 

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11 Responses to things you cannot keep in jars

  1. Great… all the words, and a great use if the word jar.

  2. Grace says:

    Wow, love all the words and that ending sums it all:

    the way a journey
    jars
    you loose,
    alive,
    awake.

  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    This dances indeed. I love it. And I love the positive spin on ‘jars’.

  4. maria says:

    Such beauty needs no jar to keep them.. ❤

  5. lillian says:

    “the bubblegrin sun as it
    melt-shimmers over blue”

    Absolutely ADORE these words! Smiling I am over my second cup this morning. A wonderful vision to start my day with! 🙂

  6. Whistles!!! ❤ Indeed we can not seize beauty inside a jar … sigh such a profound write 😀

  7. kanzensakura says:

    the breeze that spills your soul to stars…love love love that line. If only we could.

  8. Truedessa says:

    Some things just cannot be contained such as:
    the breeze that spills your
    soul to stars

    that is the breeze you will truly feel

  9. rosemawrites says:

    geez. the ending felt like a song, a beautiful song i must say. ❤

  10. Wow! Fabulous work, with a resounding ending.

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