skip to my lu{na}

..

she’s a sky dance, a bubble door lull
-abied to silence. a silver-shimmer melted
to a green twist-grin. a cheap thrill breeze, a
milk spill frozen and rose high. a slivered journey,
a gurney for a broken star. a jar

the sun leaves open.

..
A third Q44 for dVerse. 

 

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13 Responses to skip to my lu{na}

  1. frankhubeny says:

    Very nice sound throughout this poem. I enjoyed saying it aloud.

  2. You do the best things with hyphens and I’ve noticed your are infecting me. Yeah!

  3. When I first read it, I didn’t go all the way down, I guess, and missed that marvelous final line. What a perfect image.

  4. Sherry Marr says:

    WOW! How absolutely gorgeous.

  5. So love the way you play with words. What you do seems natural, like breathing, and yet is intricate and purposeful. Beautiful!

  6. Ghaa… now I have to write one with all the words too… love the luna, and those marvelous hyphenated line breaks…

  7. Sumana Roy says:

    “a jar

    the sun leaves open.”…how cleverly written!…

  8. The line breaks create such magic!! ❤ You absolutely rocked this one De 😀

  9. Shawna says:

    Excellent. The title is especially clever. 🙂

  10. rosemawrites says:

    that last line! 🙂 gorgeous piece, De! ❤

  11. SMiLes..
    Love folks..
    who ride by seats
    of Motorcycles so
    free now.. air in hair
    breeze..
    live now..
    go for broke
    stay fixed for Free..
    oH.. Jack London.. your
    changed dog to Wolf
    lives as me.. but nah..
    i’LL dance free and save-on helmets..:)

    ps..
    Bingo.. 44..
    it’s like Monkey’s
    typing.. sooner or later..
    even free ones
    get
    caught
    iN Zoos..
    hehe.. and twice..
    i kinda cheat-ed to geT-iN..
    That reminds me.. yes! Toy
    Soldier..! i needed that Song..
    Sorry.. no conText
    but
    a cAll….
    from ET
    phones home..44..2..;)

  12. Love it. A favorite today.

  13. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Lovely play, creating gorgeousness.

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