hand it to the moon

Posted on September 21, 2016 by

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know she’s a sky-crack
crescent checkmark,
ghostfree and waning.

 

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2 Responses to hand it to the moon

  2. LZ says:
    September 23, 2016 at 7:01 am

    The title makes me giggle.

    I love the phrase “sky-crack” … which makes me think of “sky-cracker” … which makes me think of a new type of firecracker that’s just been invented. You set it off (the reaction) by biting into the special cracker (sold separately, of course).

    “crescent checkmark” is stunning and so super creative

    “ghostfree” … a wonderful way to be … it actually makes me think of the Buddhist philosophy of living in the now, with no memory at all … 24 hours; that’s about all I can handle 😉

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