Partings

..

The way the sky cracks
open
to allow
the rising of the moon.

The way your lips part
just before
we bid the day adieu.

 

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Prompted by Walt’s Poetics Tuesday over at dVerse. Come 
play! 

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13 Responses to Partings

  1. Bryan Ens says:

    The two halves of this are perfect reflections of each other. Beautiful.

  2. Brian says:

    The poem is like an orange, peeled segments of a day.

  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Superlative!

  4. Ah, lovely. Nice to be saying goodbye with someone, and not to someone. There have been a lot of melancholy poems so far. This is just so evocative.

  5. hypercryptical says:

    A truly beautiful write. Lovely lovely lovely.
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

  6. kim881 says:

    Wonderfully written, De! Your lines could have been the rhyming couplet of a Shakespearean sonnet. 🌹

  7. SMiLes..
    that’s
    one thing
    i rarely find
    iN poeTry Land..
    online.. lips pARting..
    in other words now..
    A face of goodbye..
    New world order
    systemizing
    same..
    aLone..
    good bye..:)

  8. Mark says:

    Such sweet sorrow…

  9. I do love how the juxtaposition of lips and moon…

  10. Shawna says:

    “The way your lips part
    just before” … Ooh, great line breaks.

  11. Oh…..my…….word……..stunning.

  12. Candy says:

    This made me sigh

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