garden faeries

shhhhhh.

they’ve got tiny
petaled
……..s  e  c  r  e  t  s,
and way too
many
pockets
to put them in.

..
Kim’s got us doing some gardening over at dVerse Poetics. Come play! 

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19 Responses to garden faeries

  1. Brian says:

    Not to mention we can never quite see them out of the corner of our eyes.

  2. Grace says:

    This delightful De ~ Love that petaled secrets ~

  3. kim881 says:

    I found your tiny poem at the end of all the other ones and it was worth the wait! A tiny petalled secret, De style!

  4. frankhubeny says:

    I liked the idea of putting secrets into pockets.

  5. erbiage says:

    lol! oh this is such fun!

  6. Everybody will desire lots of goodness. But somehow there is not much to go around!

    Hank

  7. Waltermarks says:

    Maybe that’s why i never do any good at gardening, thanks Whimsy. Garden gnomes will keep them at bay

  8. I knew there was a reason that you cannot see them… Wonderful and Peter Panish.

  9. A whimsical poem indeed! 😀

  10. Zane says:

    Hey, I see them every day. And you’re SO right about the pockets. Mine wear multi-secret-compartmented overalls, smattered in paint.

    Seriously, I love this poem. It’s a perfect example of why/how to execute a micro-poem, squeezing every little drop out of each word. You know what you’re doing, girl.

  11. Misky says:

    Love this. Totally love it.

  12. Bryan Ens says:

    a very cute piece. Would work lovely in a book of children’s poems 🙂

  13. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Those pockets made me chuckle!

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