brush, and paint it
in broad strokes: the stupidity,
the closed eyes,
(sift, swallow, spill)
Know it’s gone.
Allow your heart to be
(whirled, blended, pulverized
by the wrong
Today at dVerse, Mish has us mixing up recipes for something other than food.
I love this, De! This is your kind of prompt and you’ve aced it!
This is most excellent… serve (s)cold even…
Pure Perfection, De–you rocked the prompt, working the words like ingredients in a cooking metaphor. It may stand alone in its perfection; really enjoyed it.
I can’t even begin to explain what I see here, but it is HILARIOUS! I’ll give you a hint … “basting brush.” From there down, it was all tainted. 🙂
Oh, I like the way you hid “Dis Aster” in the title.
OH yes! These are what disasters are made of! This is wonderful, De.
Perfect De – you skewered it!
Oh boy, you have this recipe down, De!
Deception is the worst disaster that can be cooked up, and the cruelest. You were right to the point.
Oh, been there, done that. Dated a sociopath. Ugh. That final line was oh so perfect.
Most excellent! You’ve done a great job of incorporating the emotions with the format of a recipe.
Yikes…lost, tossed soul….served up cold indeed….’shivers’
YEeeeow! That is really an energetic and intense recipe for disaster. Thank you for bringing me back to your site for more!