much wanted, he
put an end to
night, to the boundaries
of water,
wizard, a particular kind
scattering. A

bundle mouth
amongst want.
Members of the sacred,
of mud and mist. Of
extended arms, beckoned

When the rain-temple
pours, he says





Today, Miz Q give us the limitation of words only found in an offered text. Come play! 


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5 Responses to Thus

  1. Cello Jolie says:

    “he put an end … to the boundaries of water” — How beautiful!

    I love this: “scattering. A bundle mouth amongst want.”

  2. julespaige says:

    I can hear the women and girls singing praises to ‘He’ who ended boundaries 🙂

  3. ihatepoetry says:

    This is mysterious and beautiful.

  4. i love it when you begin with punctuation! outstanding

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