…..a silver moonsmile;
……………….the stubble of stars.
Prompted by Poets United. Come play!
Oh mah gosh. This is awesome! I love how you set up “all eyes” by stacking “all” over the colon.
Stars as stubble on his face … how gorgeous and clever.
Nothing wrong with one or two line poems! Very zen-like space.
Love this! Why use lots of words when the point can be made with few!
Umm. So much space before that colon. Very smart. Like this.
oh, my goodness. your words!
you gave me a complete visual with so few.
Gorgeous… you rocked this one!
Shaved a shade closer, and the stars would disappear in space while the moon watched.
Certainly more difficult writing with less! Great take De!
Wow!! you’ve made Space so visual!!
Man this is awesome!! ❤️
Oh my goodness. The best lines ever. GORGEOUS!
Less is more! Lovely!
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