suspended moment

(a leaky bit of moonlight)

 



under a dark-haired driven
threadbare quilted sky,
driven bursts of clawing
breath

and the muted cry
of unglazed small
-boned crows
dreaming murder,
death –
muffled blooms
and fretful sleep.

 

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Cool visual and prompt from over at 
Miz Q

 

 

 

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4 Responses to suspended moment

  1. Mandie Hines says:

    Let me catch my breath! Whoa. Fantastic.

  2. I definitely need to reread this and absorb it. Layers.

  3. violet says:

    I adore how the title plays with that parenthetical: “(a leaky bit of moonlight)”

    Love:

    “and the muted cry
    of unglazed small”

    “under a dark-haired driven”

  4. Kir Piccini says:

    …a quilted sky

    Lovely.

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