(a leaky bit of moonlight)
under a dark-haired driven
threadbare quilted sky,
driven bursts of clawing
breath
and the muted cry
of unglazed small
-boned crows
dreaming murder,
death –
muffled blooms
and fretful sleep.
..
Cool visual and prompt from over at Miz Q.
Let me catch my breath! Whoa. Fantastic.
I definitely need to reread this and absorb it. Layers.
I adore how the title plays with that parenthetical: “(a leaky bit of moonlight)”
Love:
“and the muted cry
of unglazed small”
“under a dark-haired driven”
…a quilted sky
Lovely.