on the back porch, after the rain

Posted on April 4, 2017 by whimsygizmo

..

kiss me, quick
under the thicket
of this cotton-swallowed sky.

 

 

....
twiglet #18.

 

 

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6 Responses to on the back porch, after the rain

  1. Just Barry says:
    April 4, 2017 at 1:59 pm

    I love the images and emotions this haiku evokes.

    Reply
  3. Shawna says:
    April 4, 2017 at 3:41 pm

    That title is heaven. Also, I love the idea of having someone “kiss m[y] quick.” My speedy movements, but more than that, my deep and painful places. Also my quicksand, maybe.

    This is gorgeous. I’m all about tiny poems, and you’re reminding me how much more powerful they can be than longer pieces.

    P.S. I’m turning it into a cotton candy sky, of course. But you know that. šŸ™‚

    Reply
  4. Michelle Hed says:
    April 4, 2017 at 5:07 pm

    Oh, I just love this De. Makes me want to grab my man for a quick kiss. šŸ˜‰

    Reply
  6. Misky says:
    April 5, 2017 at 2:27 am

    I used to have a pair of boots that insinuated that…

    Thanks for joining in this week, De!

    Reply

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