That title is heaven. Also, I love the idea of having someone “kiss m[y] quick.” My speedy movements, but more than that, my deep and painful places. Also my quicksand, maybe.
This is gorgeous. I’m all about tiny poems, and you’re reminding me how much more powerful they can be than longer pieces.
P.S. I’m turning it into a cotton candy sky, of course. But you know that. 🙂
I love the images and emotions this haiku evokes.
Oh, love this
That title is heaven. Also, I love the idea of having someone “kiss m[y] quick.” My speedy movements, but more than that, my deep and painful places. Also my quicksand, maybe.
This is gorgeous. I’m all about tiny poems, and you’re reminding me how much more powerful they can be than longer pieces.
P.S. I’m turning it into a cotton candy sky, of course. But you know that. 🙂
Oh, I just love this De. Makes me want to grab my man for a quick kiss. 😉
gorgeous ~
I used to have a pair of boots that insinuated that…
Thanks for joining in this week, De!