Quill Dawn

(an ovillejo)

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Some small, unbroken begun bliss –
and in this:
the moon’s a smile, a curved-fine
shadowed line.
This slivered shining world apart
might find your heart
smoothed into something new to start.
Hold onto filament of light,
grab feathered hope, begin to write
and in this shadowed line, might find your heart.

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NaPoWriMo, day 4

 

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4 Responses to Quill Dawn

  1. Bryan Ens says:

    gorgeous write, De!

  2. Shawna says:

    I LOVE the idea of being “quill’d on.” Awesome.

    My fave:
    “the moon’s a smile, a curved-fine
    …shadowed line.
    This slivered shining world apart
    …might find your heart”

  3. I love the language that eludes to something hard to grasp “filament” and “feathered” like a riddle. Enjoyed this especially each line leading to the next!

    https://goo.gl/GAiOIy

  4. M says:

    a spell you weave, De ~

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