Somewhere in the City

Posted on April 16, 2017 by whimsygizmo

{An American sentence} 

 

Streetlamp solely sees them: lovers enfold, only raindrops between them.

 

 

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Prompted by toads. 

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11 Responses to Somewhere in the City

  1. erbiage says:
    April 16, 2017 at 2:40 pm

    Oh this is fantastic. Like the Repeating them

    Sent from my iPad

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  2. Isadora Gruye says:
    April 16, 2017 at 4:30 pm

    Sometimes simple is incredibly difficult. You make it look seamless here. Love every syllable. Thanks for posting and viva la!

    Reply
  3. georgeplace2013 says:
    April 16, 2017 at 4:38 pm

    A rainy embrace- so romantic

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  4. ManicDdaily says:
    April 16, 2017 at 5:53 pm

    Ha. Wonderful internal rhyme and use of wordplay too. Love that all that is really sole is the streetlamp! Thanks. k.

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  5. sanaarizvi says:
    April 16, 2017 at 5:55 pm

    Wonderfully romantic!! ❤️

    Reply
  7. thotpurge says:
    April 16, 2017 at 7:51 pm

    Only raindrops between them…nicely done!!!

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  8. Jim says:
    April 16, 2017 at 8:07 pm

    Clever idea here, De. Lucky raindrops, seen only by the streetlights and enfolded by lovers embracing.
    ..

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  9. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:
    April 17, 2017 at 12:36 am

    Sweet; made me smile.

    Reply
  10. Kerry says:
    April 17, 2017 at 3:01 am

    What could be more perfect?

    Reply

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