Somewhere in the City

{An American sentence} 


Streetlamp solely sees them: lovers enfold, only raindrops between them.



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11 Responses to Somewhere in the City

  1. erbiage says:

    Oh this is fantastic. Like the Repeating them

    Sent from my iPad

  2. Isadora Gruye says:

    Sometimes simple is incredibly difficult. You make it look seamless here. Love every syllable. Thanks for posting and viva la!

  3. A rainy embrace- so romantic

  4. ManicDdaily says:

    Ha. Wonderful internal rhyme and use of wordplay too. Love that all that is really sole is the streetlamp! Thanks. k.

  5. sanaarizvi says:

    Wonderfully romantic!! ❤️

  6. thotpurge says:

    Only raindrops between them…nicely done!!!

  7. Jim says:

    Clever idea here, De. Lucky raindrops, seen only by the streetlights and enfolded by lovers embracing.

  8. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Sweet; made me smile.

  9. Kerry says:

    What could be more perfect?

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