leaving the lights on for you

Posted on April 23, 2017 by whimsygizmo

 

 

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moon
sugar smile
spooned into sky
drizzled in ebony scars,
waning

sun
saffron lozenge
on horizon’s tongue,
sweet simmered day syllables
rising

 

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The Double Elevenie is a new-to-me form requested today over at NaPoWriMo, day 23.
Come play. 

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2 Responses to leaving the lights on for you

  1. D-Claire says:
    April 23, 2017 at 1:49 pm

    Oh this is lovely. I adore that both are so sweet in the mouth!

    Reply
  2. Charley says:
    April 23, 2017 at 2:29 pm

    Vibrant imagery (that can be any of the senses… and you’ve hit more than one)! Nicely done.

    Reply

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