leaving the lights on for you

 

 

..

moon
sugar smile
spooned into sky
drizzled in ebony scars,
waning

sun
saffron lozenge
on horizon’s tongue,
sweet simmered day syllables
rising

 

..

The Double Elevenie is a new-to-me form requested today over at NaPoWriMo, day 23.
Come play. 

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2 Responses to leaving the lights on for you

  1. D-Claire says:

    Oh this is lovely. I adore that both are so sweet in the mouth!

  2. Charley says:

    Vibrant imagery (that can be any of the senses… and you’ve hit more than one)! Nicely done.

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