I lie to myself all the time. But I never believe me.
– The Outsiders, S.E. Hinton
..
Looking in
{again}
,
I wonder just how long
it’s been
{no doubt}
since I was
on the inside,
looking
out.
.
This poem
is a freak,
a geek, a chic example
of what you just might not
want to be. It’s
a nerd. Absurd. Lives
on the third rock
from the sun, but
still says alien things.
This poem is strange,
deranged, on the out
-skirts of town, the
other side of the tracks,
at least two cards shy
of a full
deck.
It’s tumultuous and temp
-estuous and testy and tangled.
It’s getting ready to dangle
its participles
as far as the eye can see.
But here’s the thing:
……………… it’s free.
Art by manicddaily.com.
Prompted by toads.
That last fat stanza (five lines) is so great. 🙂
And it made me smile! Thanks, De. K.
It’s free and it’s delicious!
I love the heck out of this. From the quirky cool word choices and construction to the final denouement. Love. Love. Love it.
Third rock from the sun – love your ‘strange and deranged’ poem
I have fallen in love with this poem.
I too loved reading this, De. And loved the free rent jab at the end. I have been told, not lately, that a bird dropped me on a rock and that I was hatched by the sun. Half serious and half poking fun, I won’t forget though I am sure the person telling me this has long forgotten the incident.
..
As for me, I prefer my poetry: tumultuous and temp
-estuous and testy and tangled.
Rock on, sister.
And its absolutely breath-taking!❤️ Way to go, De 😀
Love that last line… perfect.