morning night light

Posted on May 3, 2017 by whimsygizmo

(an aubade tanka)

..

one last stolen kiss.
watch that fading sky; oh, see?
silver filament
looped to invisible strings,
moon rewires herself to sea.

 

..
prompted by poetic asides. 

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2 Responses to morning night light

  1. Shawna says:
    May 3, 2017 at 9:06 am

    Holy mojito, this is RAD!

    “rewires herself to sea” … Love that.

    Reply
  2. ihatepoetry says:
    May 5, 2017 at 2:03 pm

    Loved , esp “silver filament
    looped to invisible strings” – excellent.

    Reply

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