This is incredible. I can’t believe you came up with this from magnets. I especially like that “must heave” instead of “must have.” That was clever. Also “a purple mist moan.” That’s nice. And “a drunk sky dream crush.” Love that. Also how you closed the poem out — really stunning work, girl.
Thanks, Girl. That’s one of the things I love about the magnets, is they are so limiting. There was no “have” available, so it became “heave.” I love that.
This is incredible. I can’t believe you came up with this from magnets. I especially like that “must heave” instead of “must have.” That was clever. Also “a purple mist moan.” That’s nice. And “a drunk sky dream crush.” Love that. Also how you closed the poem out — really stunning work, girl.
Thanks, Girl. That’s one of the things I love about the magnets, is they are so limiting. There was no “have” available, so it became “heave.” I love that.