…
With storm breath and flickered fear,
we open journey-jars, spill-skip dream
-coins into bubbled shadows. Dance a
wish, lull-curl-whispered across spring-surface.
The echo-sound’s a cued breeze,
melted shimmer-grin-ghost. A boast-giggle,
drizzled-green dawn. The twist leaves sparks,
still-twisted scars that pepper-cloud our longing.
Balloon economy,
rising.
..
This is the One With All the Words, for the Q44 prompt over at dVerse today. I’m hosting. Come play!
“Ballon economy rising” is great. But I like “open journey-jars” even better.
Love the word play De ~ This is my favorite: The twist leaves sparks,
still-twisted scars that pepper-cloud our longing.
Well, somehow you also used all the words and made an interesting interplay of images in my mind.
Love the title – but I’m sure there is a moon somewhere still.
Stunning title and stunning Quadrille!
I love all the words. 🙂 I admire each of my fellow poets who do that, but haven’t rustled up the nerve myself. Well done, a fast-paced Q here.
Wonderful use of all the words. My favorite is “spill-skip dream-coins”.
Nice use of all the Quadrille words.
Such a delight! I somehow read peppermint into this at first–well, it seems to fit. 🙂