..
She’s walked a few
in blue
suede, slipped
ruby,
glass.
Laced up
before the dawn
in pursuit of
early grace.
Donned lace
and leather, canvas;
retraced her own
………steps
(backward)
……….barefoot
…….in sand.
She’s landed
sharp, and soft,
and on too-high heels
and flatfooted and soft-shoed
and unluckily shod.
Her boots
are made for walkin’
ridin’
stayin’
centered, scuffed
and flawed.
..
Written for Kim’s awesome prompt over at dVerse Poetics today. Come play!
So many great ways (and not so) ways to wear shoes… but I suspect the barefooted one’s are the best.
I like the fact that this person is flawed, dreams, works….so much to be told from the tale of shoes
I like this very much, such a wonderful picture you’ve painted. Well done you. Greetings!
That is a beauty of a title, De, and an awesome poem to boot (pun intended!).
I love the musical and other references, especially the rhyme in::
‘She’s walked a few
in blue
suede’
and
the final stanza.
A real shoe poem! So much footwear, and it doesn’t seem even a little bit contrived! Love it 🙂
I liked the scuffed and flawed at the end of a history wearing many kinds of shoes.
Yours’ was a wonderful write! She’ll need more…..
This poem has a wonderful lilt to it, every word trips along perfectly. Enjoyed it very much. Especially the last verse and the ‘stayin’ centered’ in the middle of it. Every girl needs a pair of shoes to keep her centred. 😊
Some women have a 100 pair of shoes; a real fixation; some buy a lot of purses–your lady has managed her selection with style & grace.
Yep, a pair for every situation! Great poem. I’ll bet the scuffed boots are the most treasured!
you sound well traveled 🙂
That line break after “ruby” is cracking me up. 🙂
I love the idea of slipping on suede (suede-slipping). And dude, suede=Sue+De! If you were bi, you should definitely date a girl named Sue so to smash your names together and make “suede.” (I know. I’m cray cray.)
This poem is a million times awesome. I won’t go into all the nuances, cuz you know them. But it’s mega great.
E-specially that title!!!
A tantalising title and a fandango of footwear – loved this poem!
Love this, De! All the scuffs that go into life’s shoes. Perhaps barefoot is best.