Pay No Attention To This Ordinary Tuesday


Watching the moon slice
open the sky,

she is still shadow
-boxing her own smile.


twiglet #53


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8 Responses to Pay No Attention To This Ordinary Tuesday

  1. Shawna says:

    Do you really want to know what I think “boxing her own smile” means?

  2. Gastradamus says:

    I like it. Very simple and yet I enjoyed it. Would love your feedback on my new short called The Writers Block. Really hope to see you there

  3. Misky says:

    Oh my gosh, this is splendiferous! 🤩

  4. qbit says:

    “The moon slicing open the sky”!!! Wow. And *boxing*, LOL!

  5. Love it. “The moon slicing open the sky”

  6. julespaige says:

    A two faced moon? I might be missing the boxing reference…
    Unless it looks like the moon has a blackened eye?
    I like to see the Rabbit in the Moon. That’s a wonderful story to look up:
    Odd sometimes in the seasons to see the moon and sun in the sky at the same time. 🙂

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