Tuesday

,

and all that’s left is
…………..a crash of clouds
my broken voice
………………………..a slash of rain.

 

twiglet #67

 

 

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6 Responses to Tuesday

  1. Misky says:

    That’s what I call impact!

    >

  2. Maple says:

    Gah, that’s good.

    I can’t think of anything I’d need that you don’t have to offer.

  3. ZurkPoetry says:

    I feel like I’m part of the scene. The punctuation makes my inner eye switch between the close and the overall setting in a cohesive way, tying both together to make the meaning clear. Super amazing poem. I really really like it.

  4. Candy says:

    Ooooo! Beautifully melancholy

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