Tuesday

Posted on March 13, 2018 by whimsygizmo

,

and all that’s left is
…………..a crash of clouds
my broken voice
………………………..a slash of rain.

 

twiglet #67. 

 

 

This entry was posted in twiglets and tagged , . Bookmark the permalink.

6 Responses to Tuesday

  1. Misky says:
    March 13, 2018 at 4:35 pm

    That’s what I call impact!

    >

    Reply
  2. Maple says:
    March 13, 2018 at 5:04 pm

    Gah, that’s good.

    I can’t think of anything I’d need that you don’t have to offer.

    Reply
  4. ZurkPoetry says:
    March 13, 2018 at 5:39 pm

    I feel like I’m part of the scene. The punctuation makes my inner eye switch between the close and the overall setting in a cohesive way, tying both together to make the meaning clear. Super amazing poem. I really really like it.

    Reply
  5. Candy says:
    March 13, 2018 at 5:45 pm

    Ooooo! Beautifully melancholy

    Reply

Use your words.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Gravatar
WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out /  Change )

Cancel

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.