this remains

Posted on April 10, 2018 by whimsygizmo


..

:
your tiger
lying eyes
and an indigo syrup sky
,
served with a thick slice
of moon.

..
twiglets #71. ..

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9 Responses to this remains

  1. Misky says:
    April 10, 2018 at 3:16 pm

    Oh this a treat of poem, De.

    Reply
  2. Shawna says:
    April 10, 2018 at 4:55 pm

    “and an indigo syrup sky”

    Now that is just gorgeous — and delicious. Boysenberry is my favorite, so as my friend Shannon says, ” I could just sop that up with a biscuit.” Or in this case, a pancake. 🙂

    Or flapjack. Not sure of the dif, but I do like the word.

    No wonder the moon is thick, eating all that drippy-licious sky syrup!

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  3. Shawna says:
    April 10, 2018 at 5:01 pm

    Of course, there is the reading where someone’s bum has been syrup’d. 🙂

    I’m dying for a tiger cat, so I’m picturing the speaker talking to her cat — like they’re about to throw down over this breakfast plate.

    Reply
  4. purplepeninportland says:
    April 10, 2018 at 5:11 pm

    I LOVE “indigo syrup sky”.

    Reply
  5. qbit says:
    April 11, 2018 at 5:33 am

    tiger lying eyes!!

    Reply
  6. Shawna says:
    April 11, 2018 at 6:06 am

    “:
    your tiger”

    Now I see “eye your tiger” in the opening.

    Reply
  7. Kir Piccini says:
    April 12, 2018 at 3:53 pm

    I can almost taste it.

    Reply
  8. Jules says:
    April 15, 2018 at 11:01 am

    Oooh…. sounds like a great opening for a murder mystery. 🙂

    Reply

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