like a page,
………………………………..like an empty box
rage,
………………….like a (rib)cage
-d bird, singing.
..
twiglet #72, with somethin’ me n Shawna said.
like a page,
………………………………..like an empty box
rage,
………………….like a (rib)cage
-d bird, singing.
..
twiglet #72, with somethin’ me n Shawna said.
OMG, this is awesome — I LOVE what you added with that last line. Whew. A d-bird singing. That is fine writing, my dear.
This is really interesting. Mesmerising almost. I’ve read it three times. Loved it each time.
Really, really like this
That’s what this spring has been like… caged up –
except for the fluke days in February when it was in the 70’s!