Hesitations of the Dawn

Posted on May 9, 2018 by whimsygizmo

We forget her scar
-let dress is just for
early risin’, surprisin’
us with all its crimson
silk applause.

Pause,
take a second
………..look
,
and book a table
for two
near the horizon.

 

..
Prompted by Poetic Asides. 

 

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4 Responses to Hesitations of the Dawn

  1. Piper says:
    May 9, 2018 at 9:34 am

    Oh, man. This is stunning! What a gorgeous sunrise. That opening image is killer.

    Reply
  2. qbit says:
    May 10, 2018 at 7:01 am

    Great. “all its crimson silk applause.” is terrific.

    Reply
  3. Sherry Marr says:
    May 11, 2018 at 10:42 am

    Lovely. A seat near the horizon is just what we need, morning and night.

    Reply
  4. purplepeninportland says:
    May 16, 2018 at 11:39 am

    ‘crimson silk applause’ – only you could write something like this beauty!

    Reply

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