Sometimes You Feel Like a Nut

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Moon snickers. She’s got
a secret, a milky
way of char-
stone chewing up this
dark sky. She’s all butter
-fingers and mounds of moonbeam
…….chuckles
twix(t) the 3
musketeers sneers
of Orion’s belt notch trio.

It’s pay day somewhere
up there
on Mars;
(good)bar’s open
to suggestions,
……..questions,
and the 5thavenue
shopping window
sparkle
……-spray of crackled stars.

 

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Not goin’ anywhere for awhile? You’re gonna wanna lay a finger on this prompt – Lil’s over at dVerse Poetics. 🙂

 

 

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15 Responses to Sometimes You Feel Like a Nut

  1. lillian says:

    oh…..sooooo glad you posted. LOVE it! So many great lines….spray of crackled stars! It’s payday somewhere up there on mars 🙂 LOVE this solar system post! Sometimes you feel like a nut 🙂 Chuckling I am…with those moon snickers! This is sweet….so sweet! 🙂

  2. Kir Piccini says:

    This is already a favorite. I love this poem of candy and sweetness.
    Yum.

  3. I love how you used these brands. So creative and playful!

  4. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice sound in these lines: “It’s pay day somewhere
    up there
    on Mars;”

  5. Love those moon snickers, De. Great poem!

  6. Truedessa says:

    I especially enjoyed the last stanza – it made me smile. Wonderful bit of magical words

  7. kim881 says:

    I love your lunar magic and cosmic glitter , De! I particularly love:
    ‘…She’s all butter
    -fingers and mounds of moonbeam
    …….chuckles’
    and
    ‘…the 5thavenue
    shopping window
    sparkle
    ……-spray of crackled stars’.

  8. This is glorious! So playful, so magical. You were made for this prompt – or vice versa??

    Just realised I have totally overdone the question marks in my last couple of comments. Put it down to a candy overdose…!!!!!?????!!!!!

  9. Love this… it’s hard to say anything else than sweet… maybe sugarushed works…

  10. a chocaholic frolic – as bubbly as an aero with these wonderful lines
    “She’s all butter
    -fingers and mounds of moonbeam
    …….chuckles”

  11. mhmp77 says:

    kaykuala

    and the 5th avenue
    shopping window
    sparkle

    Reminds one of the joys of shopping days

    Hank

  12. Mandie Hines says:

    Such a fun poem!

  13. MNL says:

    love this! fun.

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