..
Moon snickers. She’s got
a secret, a milky
way of char-
stone chewing up this
dark sky. She’s all butter
-fingers and mounds of moonbeam
…….chuckles
twix(t) the 3
musketeers sneers
of Orion’s belt notch trio.
It’s pay day somewhere
up there
on Mars;
(good)bar’s open
to suggestions,
……..questions,
and the 5thavenue
shopping window
sparkle
……-spray of crackled stars.
..
Not goin’ anywhere for awhile? You’re gonna wanna lay a finger on this prompt – Lil’s over at dVerse Poetics. 🙂
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oh…..sooooo glad you posted. LOVE it! So many great lines….spray of crackled stars! It’s payday somewhere up there on mars 🙂 LOVE this solar system post! Sometimes you feel like a nut 🙂 Chuckling I am…with those moon snickers! This is sweet….so sweet! 🙂
This is already a favorite. I love this poem of candy and sweetness.
Yum.
I love how you used these brands. So creative and playful!
Awesome.
Nice sound in these lines: “It’s pay day somewhere
up there
on Mars;”
Love those moon snickers, De. Great poem!
I especially enjoyed the last stanza – it made me smile. Wonderful bit of magical words
I love your lunar magic and cosmic glitter , De! I particularly love:
‘…She’s all butter
-fingers and mounds of moonbeam
…….chuckles’
and
‘…the 5thavenue
shopping window
sparkle
……-spray of crackled stars’.
This is glorious! So playful, so magical. You were made for this prompt – or vice versa??
Just realised I have totally overdone the question marks in my last couple of comments. Put it down to a candy overdose…!!!!!?????!!!!!
Love this… it’s hard to say anything else than sweet… maybe sugarushed works…
a chocaholic frolic – as bubbly as an aero with these wonderful lines
“She’s all butter
-fingers and mounds of moonbeam
…….chuckles”
kaykuala
and the 5th avenue
shopping window
sparkle
Reminds one of the joys of shopping days
Hank
Such a fun poem!
love this! fun.
Thank you!
yeaaa it happens