That’s the biz
(all the buzz);
pour me a giggle-glug
and let’s muttermurmurmutter
hiss
our way to the kerplunk crunk
…………..(rumble-rustle-rush)
of phrase.
These days,
we all hoot and hum,
jangle thumbs at days and days
…and days
of ding-dong ditches and flip
-flop flutter, life’s hard knocks
and tick-tock.
Throw in a can-do
swoosh
and some waffle-wacked
wallop, too.
Cha-ching. Zing.
(Achoo.)
……………..(Ah, God bless you.)
Bjorn’s got a fun one over at dVerse today. In case you can’t tell, we’re playing with sound. Come on over!
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How fun! I read this out loud and it is a feast of sounds.
Well bless your heart… I think you knocked this one out of the park!!
This is so much fun. I loved reading it out loud!
This was an absolute blast to read out loud — although I had to try a couple of times because I was laughing so much at the sound of your piece – I loved it!
Gin Fizz – I remember having one of those once – Gin and I don’t agree – but, your poem was wonderful.
i liked the ahchoo! that was so unexpectedly good
Definitely one to read out loud, De, and the prompt was right up your street! Great fun!
“pour me a giggle-glug” – I shall ask for one of these from now on instead of G&T –
a fabulous frolicking rollicking poem
What a perfect fun rush of word… I feel perfect preparing for a Friday evening
Nice phrasing: ” life’s hard knocks
and tick-tock”
An absolute hoot to read, De!
Your alliteration was killer, and the tempo of the was roller coaster; great fun–5 smiles.
Loved reading this aloud.
“Waffle whacked wallop” Just a GREAT phrase!
pour me a giggle-glug
yeah… me too! Where can I get one?