Slipped (Gin) Fizz

That’s the biz
(all the buzz);
pour me a giggle-glug
and let’s muttermurmurmutter
hiss
our way to the kerplunk crunk
…………..(rumble-rustle-rush)
of phrase.

These days,
we all hoot and hum,
jangle thumbs at days and days
and days
of ding-dong ditches and flip
-flop flutter, life’s hard knocks
and tick-tock.

Throw in a can-do
swoosh
and some waffle-wacked
wallop, too.

Cha-ching. Zing.

(Achoo.)

……………..(Ah, God bless you.)

 

Bjorn’s got a fun one over at dVerse today. In case you can’t tell, we’re playing with sound. Come on over! 

 

 

 

 

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15 Responses to Slipped (Gin) Fizz

  1. V.J. Knutson says:

    How fun! I read this out loud and it is a feast of sounds.

  2. rothpoetry says:

    Well bless your heart… I think you knocked this one out of the park!!

  3. This is so much fun. I loved reading it out loud!

  4. Jo says:

    This was an absolute blast to read out loud — although I had to try a couple of times because I was laughing so much at the sound of your piece – I loved it!

  5. Truedessa says:

    Gin Fizz – I remember having one of those once – Gin and I don’t agree – but, your poem was wonderful.

  6. Singledust says:

    i liked the ahchoo! that was so unexpectedly good

  7. kim881 says:

    Definitely one to read out loud, De, and the prompt was right up your street! Great fun!

  8. “pour me a giggle-glug” – I shall ask for one of these from now on instead of G&T –
    a fabulous frolicking rollicking poem

  9. What a perfect fun rush of word… I feel perfect preparing for a Friday evening

  10. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice phrasing: ” life’s hard knocks
    and tick-tock”

  11. An absolute hoot to read, De!

  12. Glenn Buttkus says:

    Your alliteration was killer, and the tempo of the was roller coaster; great fun–5 smiles.

  13. ihatepoetry says:

    Loved reading this aloud.

  14. lillian says:

    “Waffle whacked wallop” Just a GREAT phrase!

  15. Justin Jackson says:

    pour me a giggle-glug

    yeah… me too! Where can I get one?

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