Got Stuck

in the muck. In my
truck.

(Just bad luck.)

Tried to flee. Silly me.
Feet got tucked
in that muck
with my truck.

(Aw, shucks.)

Pulled ’em loose. Lost
my shoes.

(Bad news.)

Still here. Oh, dear.
Mud in ear. End is near.

(Yuck!)

 

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Today calls for something silly. I’m hosting the Quadrille over at dVerse. Come play! 

 

 

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26 Responses to Got Stuck

  1. This reminds me of Frankie’s childhood book “My Truck is Stuck!” I still remember the refrain: “What rotten luck! My truck is stuck!” A yukky situation, to be sure! Great write!

  2. Ha.. Love it… when the mud is rising the end is near… may rescue come to get the truck out from the muck

  3. Glenn Buttkus says:

    It must really suck to get stuck with your truck in the muck–talk about bad luck; makes you just want to kick a duck; smile.

  4. Ha, ha, ha! I love the use of brackets here, and the internal dialogue. It works really well.

  5. kim881 says:

    Is this a true story by any chance, De? I love the silly rhyming and the bracket talk!

  6. Frank Hubeny says:

    There’s a lot of yucky things to avoid.

  7. sanaarizvi says:

    Oh I absolutely adore this! ❤️ Such delightful rhymes in this one, De 🙂

  8. kanzensakura says:

    Having been stuck in Southern mud, I can relate. A fun take on the prompt. Love all the rhymes!

  9. Beverly Crawford says:

    Oh dear, stuck in the muck in your truck! Yuck indeed.

  10. V.J. Knutson says:

    Ha ha ha ….great visual.

  11. jillys2016 says:

    Ok, you get the prize for the yuckiest image – mud in the ear!!! Fun 🙂

  12. Gina says:

    mud is ear is total yuck! I am sorry your lost your shoes, more yuck between the toes…shudders!

  13. Mish says:

    Oh my goodness, this resonates. Long story….that involves mud, a truck and a canyon in New Mexico. I liked the format of your poem, alternating with pauses of reaction to the situation.

  14. Oh no! Hope you didn’t fall in it 😳

  15. rothpoetry says:

    I could see you mucking yourself up!

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  17. Ali says:

    This is too horribly familiar to be funny.

  18. Waltermarks says:

    And then when the yuck dries on your soles, you have to dig it out with a knife, lol. Thanks for a yucky, mucky look at the mud

  19. Haha! I can see you going under into all that yuck! What luck!

  20. lynn__ says:

    This would make a great children’s book, I think! Fun prompt, De 😀

  21. Tim Philippart says:

    Fun piece

  22. Gillena Cox says:

    Smiling, luv silly

    much love…

  23. sdtp33 says:

    what the muck? great fun!

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