..
,
we realize
(not quite soon
enough)
that we are made
of silt, and salt.
not our fault,
perhaps – this being
our glorious dark
-est hour of burning hunger,
quiet storm.
that slice, that nice
bright sliver of praise
and protest, smiling sky,
she’s tired of grinning, feeling
fractured, not quite full.
i can’t blame her. con
-flicted by her mostly hidden
gaze, i’m still mostly saved, for
-given by a toxic sky and all
these just-mine stars.
i love her.
(have I said that?)
even in her most slender
state, she’s got me found
in fragments. i’ll pass
these wishes through the
stars be
-t(w)een, and know this mar
-bled sea might anti
-cipate my tears.
all these brave embattled
years, we’ve held out love
and haunted hate with
loud un
-apologetic glee. We’ve bent
a knee and rubbed
this earth. we’ve proved our
syllabled selves as warriors,
rebirthed.
..
In November, we poem.
“that slice, that nice
bright sliver of praise”
This would be the perfect stocking stuffer, don’t you think?
Ohhhh, yessss. I’d slide it right onto my tongue. Perfection.
Why can’t Christmas just be a sharing of candy and fruit? This electronics nonsense is way out of hand.
And books! And wine!
the technique. the pauses. the comma-beginning. the imagery. wow.
Thank you so much. 🙂
The pauses were perfect. They added so much to this piece.
thanks so much.