Chameleon Moon

She winks and mocks
from a curious sky,
golden one moment,
silver the next
and trying hard
to play peek-a-blue
with all these clueless
clouds.

She’s a wily one,
and before you can quite
catch her, fetch her,
she changes into
specter,
spider,
storm.

 

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It’s Quadrille Monday over at dVerse, and I’m hosting. Come play! 

 

 

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51 Responses to Chameleon Moon

  1. Grace says:

    She is a mystery of all times. Love the chameleon – specter, spider, storm. Thanks for hosting De.

  2. Love it so much… the peek-a-blue made me smile…
    miss chievous moon

  3. A spider from Mars, no doubt 🙂

  4. V.J. Knutson says:

    I like it! The moon’s a trickster.

  5. Glenn Buttkus says:

    The moon hides a lot behind our winter’s cloudy skies; such a shame. Your tale is so fetching.

  6. This is lovely. I know the wordcount doesn’t allow for it but I would have loved another stanza. Those two left me desperate for more.

  7. welshstream says:

    Just love the moon ~ and this is a lovely little poem capturing some of her many aspects

  8. lillian says:

    Ah the changing phases of the moon…..fickle she is!

  9. Love this! And even though Bjorn beat me to it, I’m going to say the “peek-a-blue” was my favorite line.

  10. I like the playfulness of the first stanza, and then the switch to something a little spookier. Deft.

  11. qbit says:

    “to play peek-a-blue” — fabulous.

  12. Rob Kistner says:

    Love that sneaky moon, and loved this poem De! Oh those foolish clueless clouds… 😉 BTW, we got a super-blood-wolf moon coming the 21st! Click on my name here if you’re curious.

  13. msjadeli says:

    Fun wordplay here.

  14. Beverly Crawford says:

    Peek-a-blue … Inspired! Such a gentle, sweet poem, bearing that wily moon no ill will at all!

  15. – ” a curious sky,” – arouses the reader’s interest right from the start and finishes on lovely lyrical wordplay

  16. sanaarizvi says:

    Such a wonderfully mysterious character you paint here, De! ❤️ I love how “she changes into specter, spider, storm.” Wow!

  17. Candy says:

    LOVE your moon poems – peek-a-blue – you are too clever!

  18. Lovely lines. Clueless clouds got a laugh out of me.

  19. lollipop chakras says:

    I already sent you my thoughts. I love your poem.

  20. rothpoetry says:

    Your images are so good. Love the ever changing and elusive moon!

  21. wildchild47 says:

    to be lulled by luna – and the tic! tick! switch it to the far side, which we never see … ah well, we can dream and enjoy the wonderful words here …. this is both light and charming, playful and slightly wicked, in the best of ways … enjoyed your quadrille so much 🙂

  22. It dances! A very playful and effective poem.

  23. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar says:

    Fascinating how the moon can be both comforting and scary at times… I suppose it has a lot to do with the clouds and weather…

  24. Ali Grimshaw says:

    I like playfulness of this. May we never tire of the moon and her magic.

  25. Nora says:

    peek-a-blue is delightful! Thank you for the chimerical changeling challenge.

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  27. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice line about the curious sky: “to play peek-a-blue”

  28. kim881 says:

    I am enchanted by your chameleon moon, De! I love the use of colour in the first stanza and the internal rhyme and ‘ooh’ sounds of ‘play peek-a-blue / with all these clueless / clouds’, and the internal slant rhymes in the second stanza.So playful!

  29. A wonderful Q De, I especially love her playing ‘peek-a-blue with all these clueless clouds’ xxx

  30. Moon Colors
    More Emotions
    GRoWinG Birds
    With Wings
    Humans
    Take
    oFF iNFeathers
    Do iT aGaiN
    ALWaYS iN
    MoonLiGHT
    Feels So
    Right
    As Night So Bright..:)

  31. Teresa says:

    This is a wonderful characterization of the moon.

  32. Misky says:

    Oh those last three lines are fab!

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