pilfering wishes under a pockmarked sky

Posted on June 1, 2021 by whimsygizmo


after we’ve said all 
there is to sigh
we stand

,

scooping fallen stars 
into our cupped hands. 

written for twiglets. come play!

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7 Responses to pilfering wishes under a pockmarked sky

  2. Jules says:
    June 1, 2021 at 5:50 pm

    Reminds me of romantic beach walks with my hubby. We’re big hand holders!

    Reply
  3. Ron. says:
    June 1, 2021 at 7:25 pm

    “…all there is to sigh…” Cool play, DJ. Well done. Thanks

    Reply
  5. poetrybydebi says:
    June 2, 2021 at 6:51 am

    “…all there is to sigh…” Yes, I missed that in the first reading, automatically read say. Sigh is clever but also perfect.

    Reply
  6. Ken / rivrvlogr says:
    June 2, 2021 at 10:56 am

    Such a dreamy feel to this.

    Reply
  7. jewishyoungprofessional says:
    June 2, 2021 at 4:59 pm

    Those last lines are so powerful

    Reply

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