pilfering wishes under a pockmarked sky


after we’ve said all 
there is to sigh
we stand

,

scooping fallen stars 
into our cupped hands. 

written for twiglets. come play!

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7 Responses to pilfering wishes under a pockmarked sky

  1. Jules says:

    Reminds me of romantic beach walks with my hubby. We’re big hand holders!

  2. Ron. says:

    “…all there is to sigh…” Cool play, DJ. Well done. Thanks

  3. poetrybydebi says:

    “…all there is to sigh…” Yes, I missed that in the first reading, automatically read say. Sigh is clever but also perfect.

  4. Such a dreamy feel to this.

  5. Those last lines are so powerful

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