(a glosa)
since feeling is first
who pays any attention
to the syntax of things
will never wholly kiss you;
– E. E. Cummings
::
we’ve developed a thirst
for the ways the world
bends, the trends that
make and break us, the
runways and the head
-lines and the lack of spines
when looks replace books
and nobody spares a dime
and time ticks us off.
since feeling is first,
we forget kisses, wisdom,
humanity could heal itself
if we all just pause and
listen to this same breeze,
ask the trees what they might
know, blow a fluttered moon
back into this vast sky and
try our hands at hope. even the
flowers are swearing songs, but
who pays any attention?
and have we mentioned salt?
it’s not the ocean’s fault
we wave our hands and
take our stands and miss
the ebb and flow of flotsam
faith. there’s all this soap(box)
foam and no way home because
even that wily moon shows
her silent, darkest side
to the syntax of things.
we miss the buzz and zip
and zing of every leaning,
laughing thing when we
rush and crush each other
with our winter smiles.
we wander miles in too
-tight shoes. until we
pause to embrace the blues,
this life, this spring, this thing
will never wholly kiss you.
::
An attempt at a the glosa form, for day 3 of NaPoWriMo. You can read Cummings’ full poem here.
You amaze me, once again!
Thank you so much.
This was such a fun read. The somewhat irregular rhyme and natural lyrical lilt feels like the perfet compliment to Cummings. Thank you for sharing!
Thank you!
Oh, this is splendid. It feels like an ode to humanity but also the obituary.