see, here’s the gist:
this poem does not want
to be told. she’s holding it all
in way too close to feathered
chest assuming playing dumb
and stumbled silence best
for flying below
the radar,
or snow.
see, here’s the ghost:
of chance, she cannot speak. it’s
been a week or two or three since
falling. stalling’s easy, really,
if you’ve breathed
this breeze.
but here’s the list:
ink. salt. trees.
with these, she just might
burst open like a down
pillow
(fight)
,
take
flight.
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Not sure why, but I like this poem. What else counts?
Love:
“stalling’s easy, really,
if you’ve breathed
this breeze.”
I’m imagining this being one of those beautiful tearjerker horse movies, where she gets injured and all hope is lost, until a child (or bird) brings her back to life and glory.
Whaddya mean, “ink. salt. trees…”? Everyone KNOWS it’s: cognac, cinnamon, mushrooms. Sheesh. Otherwise, this poem R.O.C.K.S!!!
Ive had a few months like that myself …and so I sought a truth “listener” and let my thoughts , feelings, words….flow.