Deliberate Storms 

Posted on November 25, 2022 by whimsygizmo



A maelstrom stirs 
in her chest,
poorly born 
concave shell. 

Damn, 
but this land’s 
a swung 
         (sprung) 
place 
to watch lightning fingers 
jigsaw the sky. 

::
Quickly, day 25.

https://imprompt.wordpress.com/2022/11/25/day-25/
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3 Responses to Deliberate Storms 

  1. barbcrary says:
    November 25, 2022 at 9:43 am

    Damn. This is good!

    Reply
  2. qbit says:
    November 25, 2022 at 6:50 pm

    “A maelstrom stirs
    in her chest,
    poorly born
    concave shell. ” – excellent!

    Reply
  3. Shawna says:
    November 26, 2022 at 8:31 am

    This makes me think of sick kids who can’t go outside but who can only watch through the window. It reminds me of The Secret Garden.

    Reply

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