Knack Smackdown

Posted on January 27, 2012 by whimsygizmo
 
Crush these ashen shards
between your fingertips,
scatter my story
to the four winds,
scald instinct
into heated hiding. 
Charm those whispering sisters
Fear and Pain
into fighting frail urges,
believing again. 
 
 
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5 Responses to Knack Smackdown

  1. whimsygizmo says:
    January 27, 2012 at 8:12 pm

    Written (belatedly) for The Sunday Whirl weekly wordle. http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2012/01/22/wordle-40/

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  2. Hannah Gosselin says:
    January 27, 2012 at 8:20 pm

    Wow I’m feeling like a slouch! I need to expand my blog writing universe! lol This is potent…”Crush these ashen shards/between your fingertips,” very nice!

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  3. whimsygizmo says:
    January 27, 2012 at 8:22 pm

    Thanks, Hannah. This amazing soul offers a comprehensive list:
    http://margoroby.wordpress.com/2012/01/27/prompts-scrum-friday-freeforall/

    AWESOME. 🙂

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  4. margo roby says:
    January 27, 2012 at 8:28 pm

    Oh, very nicely done. These are difficult words to keep from sounding trite, so I love the way you use them, especially naming the sisters. But my favourite is
    scald instinct
    into heated hiding
    And thank you for the above. Sends me into the weekend with a smile.

    margo

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