the significance of a washed-out sky

Posted on May 30, 2017 by whimsygizmo

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she’s flannel-soft today, the muddled
braised white of a favorite tee turned
……………inside
……….out.

 

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twiglet#26.

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7 Responses to the significance of a washed-out sky

  1. Misky says:
    May 30, 2017 at 1:01 pm

    Perfect. Braised-white. I like that phrase.

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  2. bubbles says:
    May 30, 2017 at 1:37 pm

    If you look at it a certain way, a turned t is a sword … or a cross being drug … dragged?

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  3. georgeplace2013 says:
    May 30, 2017 at 2:13 pm

    Amazing… a high five and a two thumbs up!

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  5. mandibelle16 says:
    May 31, 2017 at 9:00 am

    I like his little Poem. You describe such a feeling of comfort init. But not a bad kind of comfort but a happy comfort relaxed, and a tranquil environment for both. The word ‘braised’ was interesting made me think both were eating good food too that that was part of their serene world.

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  6. bubbles says:
    May 31, 2017 at 9:11 am

    The sky being flannel soft is really stunning.

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  7. rosemawrites says:
    May 31, 2017 at 10:15 pm

    aaaaah. the visual. so gooood!

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