Aerial View

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She’s a mer
-maid who’s been swallowed
by the pinpoints of the map.

She’s un
-flapped by cranial tuna,
……..freeway flotsam
and jets
-aimed for better
………places,
but the traces of high
-way ink on her skin
are holding her down
like Gulliver’s Lilliputian
………………..shackles.

It’s enough
to make a cartographer
……………belch.

 

 

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4 Responses to Aerial View

  1. whimsygizmo says:

    Fun word list from my Shawna:
    belch, cartographer, cranial, tuna, aerial

  2. Love it! “Cranial tune and freeway flotsam.” Brilliant!

  3. Ha – a cartographer belch! Undone by the highways… I’m sure many can relate to that. Love the thought of “cranial tuna.”

  4. Shawna says:

    I love the title; what a fun spin on The Little Mermaid.

    This is my favorite section:
    “She’s un
    -flapped by cranial tuna,
    ……..freeway flotsam
    and jets
    -aimed for better
    ………places”

    I’m with you on these: “mere maid,” “cranial tuna,” “It’s enough.”

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