..
origami me
somebody who breathes
…..fire, de
-sires to fly, scales
the sky in crimson
strings.
ceiling wax stack
me high
and fold me
…..in
to a land
…………by the sea.
..
prompted by Herotomost’s “nostalgia” Play it Again prompt, over at toads.
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Origami me… what a great start… really wonderful
… what Bjorn said! de-lightful!
scales the sky in
crimson strings.
Obviously he is ready for take-off. Great lines De!
Hank
…and fold me. Really cool use of language here. BTW, which challenge did you write to? Just fun to give the host recognition. 🙂 And we can also go back and consider doing it ourselves. Thanks!
Herotomost’s “nostalgia” prompt. I fixed it, above. Thanks for the tip. 🙂
fire, de…
in
de
ed
..
I love the subtle allusions to the song about the dragon who lives by the sea, and the way you placed your own name in there: de desires to fly… very nicely done.
I love this!
First line and I was hooked!
I loved the word use (word play?) I like the idea of being paper, being used to create something beautiful.
Ohhh, yes beautiful.