poem drops

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some days, the ocean
lends her salty skin
to all these words,
her feathered waves
to quill. her violent
will to pull of moon
and midnight sky.

some days
i spill. some days
………………i dive.

 

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Prompted by OctPoWriMo, day 23


 

 

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7 Responses to poem drops

  1. Shawna says:

    Crazy awesome title. “Poem Drops” are candies … like lemon drops, but sweeter (and yet, somehow saltier as well).

  2. Janet says:

    this literally made my heart slip a beat. love. love!!

  3. What expressions! A vivid imagery caress the verse..Loved it!

  4. Amrita Paul says:

    Love the title….unique.

  5. This is so evocative. Love it!

  6. I like the way your last lines make a kind of diving board shape! Yes, the ocean and blue are your muses, indeed. I like the initial image of the ocean’s salty skin – and then the feathery waves. And I suppose the trick is to dive while you’re spilling so it won’t look or feel like a spill! Great idea, but I for sure could never do that 🙂

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