Delinquencies

The (pied) piper’s
about to have his
day, have his way
with all this red
………….(tape).
Let’s just escape,
……skedaddle.
………….Scram. Bam!

Seriously, though. I’m begging
you, dog. Like that homeless guy
with the cup
……………….(remember?)
on our way
……………in
………….to
…..Prague.

 

 

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13 Responses to Delinquencies

  1. Marie Elena says:

    Yep, yep, yep. Yet another amazing De write! LOVE THIS.

  2. el34ax7 says:

    Your use of sound is just so much fun. Reading again for the 5th time is just as fresh as the first.

  3. Candy says:

    Wow! You just continue to delight and amaze me with your words

  4. They are fleeing from something here! And Prague’s a long way to go, but I guess they followed that pied piper too long!

  5. Jennifer G. Knoblock says:

    You do such amazing things with sounds…and I love the visual image I get in the second part.

  6. This was fun…kind of reminded me of a nursery rhyme. Very cool! ♥

  7. Michael says:

    I agree, this was fun. The first verse especially, with “skedaddle” and “bam!”. Those are just fun words. 🙂

  8. Enjoyed reading this

  9. theinnerzone says:

    Love the structure and sounds here.

  10. innatejames says:

    I like how underneath the fun language there seems to be something hard and dark. I’m picking apart the layers, De. Nice job!

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