No. 8, Black Flowing, Jackson Pollock
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we scribble scroll crawl
our phrase to page, skull
and hammer and football helmet
daze. origami me ebony, please. i’ve
got an angry pen that needs a good s n e e z e.
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prompted by the mag.
You’ve got two “gots” in the last line.
I feel like someone has done this to me: “origami me ebony daze” … and it doesn’t really feel so great.
I think those two “gots” make it like you’re gonna sneeze! And I love that “origami me ebony” – though I agree with Shawna, it probably wouldn’t feel so good.
That was awesome I enjoyed the playfulness!
One needs the outlet! Never mind if it is just plain scribbles. Like the lighter mood here De!
Hank