(aerial duels, investigated)
..
sabotage the cerebellum by snow,
sand, apple fallen
too far from the beanstalk.
twisting crayon canyons wax
forth in the shelter of each
other, patterned back
-grounds, windy hills.
she is teen queen, radical
in her doubling, rebel in every
alliance. clarinet her beauty
in flowers, clouds, sky.
finale, flocking:
the mocking of birds.
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Cool word list from my Shawna. 🙂
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Oh how I love this; let me count the ways. 🙂
Really, every word/phrase is masterfully placed. The imagery here is to die for. Sincerely. Thank you for writing this.
Love those
twisting crayon canyons wax
I feel the need to paint and draw again.
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“clarinet her beauty” … I love this. “Clarinet” as a verb or noun. An almost ungraspable concept. “Sea-lair, I net.” Did you know I loved the clarinet when I was a child? I was dying to play it in band, but there were too many clarinet players already. So I ended up with the bass clarinet, which was awesome … but too heavy for marching.
The word play in the last two lines is very clever.