Oh, sweet spontaneous earth
and all things new and now and wow,
I wish I were more go
with the flow
and plan and wring
my hands. Oh, to be
Give me blossoms
sprung from trees, breeze
that wanders where it may.
Give me some semblance
just this one day.
Written for Prompt Nights, week 2.
I love Spring too. 🙂
Love this 😀 such a sweet and tender longing in your verse 😀
Beautifully penned. Thanks for playing De 😀
Lots of love,
Oh, YES!! Perfect, De. ❤
I hear you. Really.
Bravo! It’s all yours for the asking!
blossoms and breeze – whimsy and longing all rolled into one!
I love that clever title. It hides a world of story. (“Only” is a noun; “Spring” is a verb.)
“all things new and now and wow” … I really like this.
“I wish I were more go” … Nah. Leaving is totally overrated.
You got some clever line breaks in there.
“Give me some semblance of see-zing” … Nice.
Ah wonderful what you do with the rhymes… I would like to be like that too… but it takes too much planning.
Best prayer! So perfectly penned, De!
But blooms and songs don’t spur us to creation, but rather to adoration. Give me doom and longing and a blank canvas; I’ll supply the rest. Excellent.
This is so beautifully written 🙂