…
the sky, in all its
broken blue glory, the moon
as she reflects
her own spill.
we forget our selves,
the ways we learned
to
…..(under)
stand, to fall and land
and forget
that we can
……………….fly.
we for
-get our why, the lyrics
to our own lost
songs. the ways our
wrongs stir
-shape us
into something new.
shall we
forget these chains, strain
ourselves instead toward un
-silence?
forget these scattered
days. we spare a dime
and bide our time
and then
forget to remember
where we put it.
give me something I can use,
love, some lighter side of self
a
-buse
a
ruse,
a
-muse,meant to inspire, breathe
fire.
give me a noose
to hang the stars,
claim them back
as belt and bull
and bolt.
give me
just one breath;
some small and swollen
semblance of regret.
…………….(less),
……………………we forget.
..
..
Prompted by dVerse, and inspired by the poem, “How We Forget,” by Loyce Gayo.
“we for
-get our why, the lyrics
to our own lost
songs. the ways our
wrongs stir
-shape us
into something new.”
Learn the lesson even in our mistakes, good examples teach as much as horrible warnings.
I think for most, we have forgotten how to fly ~ Your line & word breaks are inspiring (to (under)/stand, a/buse, a/ruse, a/muse) ~ I specially like:
we for
-get our why, the lyrics
to our own lost
songs. the ways our
wrongs stir
-shape us
into something new.
Ending is lovely as well ~ Thanks for joining us De & wishing you happy week ~
Oh, sigh……this was incredibly beautiful. So many gorgeous lines and thoughts……..”we forget….the lyrics to our own lost songs”, forget we can fly…….yes, let’s claim back the stars. LOVED this poem!!!!!
GIVE ME EMOTION
OR GIVE ME DEATH..
honestly i feel it is that simple
that is what is missing
not only emotions
heard
BUT EMOTIONS
EXPRESSED
IN FULL
BODY AND
MIND EMOTIONAL
AND SENSORY WAYS
OF A REAL MOVING
CONNECTING CREATIVE
WAY OF LIVING DANCE..
TOUCH.. FEEL..
BE ALIVE
BE FREE
AS WIND
AND AIR..
BREEZE WE
ARE WHO LIVE
FREE AS WATER
SOAKS AIR AS
US WE
BREATHE
WE INSPIRE
WE FEEL WE LIVE..
TOGETHER AND NOT
SEPARATED BY TEXT
AND OTHER ONLINE STUFF
IN ALL areas of dead-hearted
communication so far
away from
the
child
who
rea
ches
out to
Mother’s
Breast to
connect to the
milk of loving water’s LOVE..:)
I couldn’t understand why GOD
AKA NATURE POSSESSED ME
TO DANCE NAKED IN FRONT
OF THE WORLD AND KNOW
I FINALLY FEEL
THERE ARE
NO WORDS
IN FLESH
AND BLOOD
THAT WILL EVER
MEET THE SKIN
OF GOD
AS
US..
FULL EXPRESSED
AND FELT AS EVOLVING
STILL TO BE FREE AS
A WAVE OF SEA
UNCLOTHED
UNDIMINISHED
UNTARNISHED
BY CLOTHING
US AWAY FROM ALIVE..:)
And that’s a metaphor for
more too.. than just dancing
naked online.. smiles.. i’m kinda
motivated and inspired today more
than usual as these words are trailing
all over today.. in telling TALING WAYS..:)
SMILES..;)
AND YES.. i’m totally mindfully aware
and sober as a hawk circling the
sun with no end
or beginning….
etc..;)
This is just splendid you are indeed the master of excellent line-breaks and wordplay… but most of all— that noose, came as a true surprise.. excellent writing. So glad you joined this prompt.
By far the most beautiful poem I have ever read……..!!!
Bravo! 😀
Yes, it is a gorgeous piece, but like a rose, it comes to us fitted with barbs to get our attention. I do dig your audacious line breaks. I’m still experimenting with that in my own work. I like your line /a muse, meant to inspire/breathe fire/.
Giving me just one breath….yes, I like that. Beautiful work, De!
Brilliant! a-buse, muse, ruse …. and my favorite:
“… the ways our
wrongs stir
-shape us
into something new.”
no less!
This reads so beautifully with the internal rhyme and line breaks.
The first stanza creates a wonderful visual….”the moon as she reflects her own spill”
That noose is a surprise – but I like what you do with it! The triple AAA could be a call for help!
we breathe automatically, because if not, we would forget … ~