Living juicy
……………………………………..tumble bumble beach feet
writing down the bones
where water comes together with other water
………….(falling up)
1…2…3 parts
poemcrazy
past perfect, present tense.
………………………………………………..Some kind of ride.
.
Living juicy
……………………………………..tumble bumble beach feet
writing down the bones
where water comes together with other water
………….(falling up)
1…2…3 parts
poemcrazy
past perfect, present tense.
………………………………………………..Some kind of ride.
.
Prompted by:
http://rhymeswithtao.blogspot.com/2012/05/bookshelf-poetry-challenge-001-opener.html#.T7F1Fu0Zcsq
(who got the idea from Pinterest…click the link above to see her link to the original.)
Also called “Spine Poetry.” Big fun. Play along!
(The gist: grab some books from your shelves, and assemble their titles into a poem.)
What fun yours is. I notice we share several of the same writing books. I may need to reread a few over the summer! And, I adore SARK.
Meeeeeee toooooo, Margo! Was just thinking I need to immerse myself in her lovely colors and delicious words, this summer! Thank you.
This is beautiful. Thank you for the link back and for playing along!
This is fun. I need to go hang out the the library and do this. ^_^
How can you not like something with “writing down the bones” and “where water comes together with other water”? You had good fodder for poem feeding there. 😀
Oh, of course your spine poem looks just like your regular poetry!!! Colorful and with a unique beauty!! Great one, De!!
fun-i have writing down the bones and poemcrazy! recommend good stuff when you think of it?
Hi, Esther. Love both of those books. I also highly recommend reading everything ever written by Sharon Creech. She’s amazing.
can you repeat the other book titles again; i’ll google sharon creech; lov n hugs
That’s great! “Writing Down the Bones” is a great title and a great line!
Thanks, Muddy. 🙂
Brilliantly fun!!
Loved yours, too, Misky. 🙂
This looks like a fun activity.
“past perfect, present tense” … Doesn’t the comma have a lot of power? “past, perfect present, tense” … I’d like a little word reversal: “past tense, present perfect” If only we could turn time into cutouts, mix and match our own puzzle
“Living juicy” is my favorite part, of course. 🙂
I totally agree, only I need the power of the colon:
past: tense
present: perfect
or maybe something softer, like ellipses…
past…tense
present…perfect.
😉
I like your colons best. But I am an em-dash kind of girl.
I am following the breadcrumbs from one entry to the site to each of you. What a fun prompt!! 🙂
Thanks, Becca.