Finding Herself in Pieces

Even her feet are puzzled this time,
though they don’t have the mechanics
for showing it, like her discombobulated
smile, or her fragile flummoxed heartbeat.
She’s a put-all-the-edges-together-first kind
of girl, then fill in the center, color by color, piece
by piece. He’s a grab-the-piece-in-front-of-you-and-
see-where-it-goes kind of a guy, a no-footsie-under-the
table kind of guy, a puzzle fuzz covered fingers kind of guy,
and she’s hopelessly, helplessly hooked. So she curls her bewild
-ered toes, hides her bamboozled smile, and dumps the whole thing
on the floor in front of her. Grabs the first piece she sees, tiny, bumpy,
strange. Holds it up to the light, thinks it looks just right, hopes it fits.

 

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11 Responses to Finding Herself in Pieces

  1. Shawna says:

    Love, love, love it. 🙂

    The first line grabbed me right away. Love “puzzle fuzz” and “hopelessly, helplessly hooked.” Excellent line break with the hyphen, splitting “bewild-ered” following by settling for the first “piece” she picks up in her wildness. Great work, as always.

  2. Talicha J. says:

    This is awesome I love what you did with this prompt. Such a great piece of work! Thanks for sharing! hope you can check out what I wrote for the prompt if you have a chance http://talichaj.com/2012/03/09/fwf-puzzle/ thanks again and awesome post!

  3. Yes, whimsical, but clever, too. I really enjoyed this!
    I love the photo at the top of your blog, too. Cute!

    It’s Over

  4. “and she’s hopelessly, helplessly hooked. So she curls her bewild
    -ered toes, hides her bamboozled smile, and dumps the whole thing
    on the floor…”
    LOVEEEE!!!!!!!! I really like how you dug into each of them like you did. and then put a “game in the mix which is so how it is, right? I love this! SO thrilled to have you back! Big smile right now! Thank you!!!

    did u ever get a twitter lol

  5. whimsygizmo says:

    Thanks, all.
    Thanks, Kellie. No, I haven’t got my Twitter re-figured out yet. Sorry. 😉

  6. Ahhh… love it! So perfectly De-licious! 🙂

    • “like her discombobulated
      smile, or her fragile flummoxed heartbeat.”
      and
      “So she curls her bewild
      -ered toes, hides her bamboozled smile,”

      This poem is amazing, De!! These ones really struck my poetic heart! ALL such goodness, though. Excellent!

  7. De, from the excellent photo to the “puzzle fuzz kind of guy,” you contrast the personalities succinctly and perfectly. I simply loved this poem. Peace, Amy

  8. Loved the metaphor of puzzle solving and the different approaches to it, great job, de.

  9. Lindy Lee says:

    Be careful when you get to the middle part; wise advice via smart metaphor…

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