Gaia’s Song

..

I long
for you to love me,
to hold my skin
as sacred as your own.

I ache
for you to make me
more than just the
place you build your thrones.

I wish
for you to want me
to be a part
of you, and you of me.

I love,
for love is all things.
And set apart, one
day it’s love you’ll see.

 

..
Written for Magaly’s Cruelest Monday, day 10

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7 Responses to Gaia’s Song

  1. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Beautifully done De ❤ ❤

  2. Gaia sits like an unrequited lover, one day we will see, appreciate feed her with love back… I hope not before she turns her back on us depleted and exhausted. I love this take on Gaia, bittersweet.

  3. mtw says:

    i love the use of repetition here – my favorite part is “to hold my skin / as sacred as your own.” it’s such a powerful illustration of the desire to be loved by someone the same way you love them.

  4. Rommy says:

    Oh goodness, this is beautiful and so very sad.

  5. Your use of enjambment creates a kind of sadness and suspense that makes this poem dig into the bones. She does long, ache, love…

  6. georginamorley says:

    I could totally feel her desire in your words XXX

  7. A plea from the ultimate love and mother to just be loved! So sad, so well done!

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