..
I long
for you to love me,
to hold my skin
as sacred as your own.
I ache
for you to make me
more than just the
place you build your thrones.
I wish
for you to want me
to be a part
of you, and you of me.
I love,
for love is all things.
And set apart, one
day it’s love you’ll see.
..
Written for Magaly’s Cruelest Monday, day 10.
Beautifully done De ❤ ❤
Gaia sits like an unrequited lover, one day we will see, appreciate feed her with love back… I hope not before she turns her back on us depleted and exhausted. I love this take on Gaia, bittersweet.
i love the use of repetition here – my favorite part is “to hold my skin / as sacred as your own.” it’s such a powerful illustration of the desire to be loved by someone the same way you love them.
Oh goodness, this is beautiful and so very sad.
Your use of enjambment creates a kind of sadness and suspense that makes this poem dig into the bones. She does long, ache, love…
I could totally feel her desire in your words XXX
A plea from the ultimate love and mother to just be loved! So sad, so well done!